First workshop poem

So I decided to write my first workshop poem instead of submitting an old one from class. As I was writing it all I thought about was is it too corny, or, does it make sense, or, what is everyone going to say?! I think this poem took me the longest to write because for one I couldn't enter my muse because I was too worried about what I was writing. I usually have no problems writing, I took a creative writing class in high school and fell in love with it. We critiqued each other and read all of our poems aloud, every single poem we wrote. But, I feel like the poems were much more structured, like my teacher told us the type of poem to write for each class where as this class its much more of a free write which is really throwing me off. Hopefully by time the next set of workshops roll around I won't concentrate so much on trying to make it perfect the first time around..