This poem came to me as I was blasting Techno music trying to get in touch with my Muse. It has a lot of rhyming, but I don't think it really sounds forced. It could definitely use more imagery and complexity, but I love the ending.
This music’s got me feelin’ so free,
As if a trance has taken over me.
Just makes me want to move my body,
Come borrow my ipod and you’ll see.
Cruisin’ in the fast lane, I ignore the speedometer.
A nice hot day, I could use a thermometer.
Arrive at my destination, the beach,
Lay down my towel and munch on a peach.
Put on my shades and close my eyes,
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